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Mon Jun 15, 2009, 7:13 AM
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Wonderful use of purple/yellow contrast and I love the glow! Her face does seem a little masculine to me. Great lighting and I appreciate the reflected light on her right breast. I almost want to see some suggested texture or contour, just so the light doesn't have to do all the work, like in the hair and fabric. Great pose and a kind of demure expression.

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Well, look at that sly/devious sort of look that says, "You know you want to join me." Great composition. I am wondering why the texture wasn't carried over to areas you have solid color or gradients (the yellow dots on top, the brown bottom, the framing). I agree with Neo's comment that the big cat does look cuddly. If that's what you're going for, great! If not, how about a more intimidating tiger with the same facial expression as the woman? That could be interesting to have her invitation (Do you want to join me?)but the big cat's challenge (Do you [really] want to join her?)...the great danger/beauty dichotomy.

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Great composition. Simple, elegant, classic. It makes me think of a sweet violin song life-long friends would share.
Sorry, the rose is over-exposed. I do love the white (thoughts of friends and not passionate lovers)...if there was some way to balance it.

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Great use of a simple color scheme. Black/white/pick-a-color can go a long way. Here, more so black/pick-a-color. Wonderful rendering of the cube and I like the little hearts!

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Wonderful red color. I think "sweet" and not "horror." Like it offers to envelope you in candy kisses. I can appreciate that not all of the rose is in focus. That makes it all the more softer and sweeter. Got to love the dew drops...even sweeter still.

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